Senin, 02 November 2009

THE GREEN REVOLUTION

Green revolution (1950-1980), a new approach to double agricultural production are no longer successfull due to population growth and cost of fertilizer. Finally, it can make a social and politic conflict, because this methode just can afford with the rich landowner so we still to asked to look at the overall picture and longterm effects from this methode an find the new mwthode that will better.
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6 komentar:

  1. Fitria Rahma16 November 2009 pukul 05.08

    The green revolution??????

    BalasHapus
  2. SoNy sayS.....19 November 2009 pukul 07.31

    give an attention in "to doubled", i think it's wrong, because after "to" must verb 1. it's called "to infinitive". still wrong "to asked". then word "successfully", i think, the form is successful. maybe enough from me... thank you...

    BalasHapus
  3. mainas_zee19 November 2009 pukul 17.52

    the paragraph who write sumarlin is okay. but very simple,so the reader get few information.
    you should give detail information, so reader get more information and knowledge.
    thank's

    BalasHapus
  4. Kartika Nuswantara20 November 2009 pukul 21.22

    a new approach to doubled agricultural production are no longer successfully

    this method still to asked need to look at the overall picture and longterm effects.

    [check...you have problem with the grammar]

    BalasHapus
  5. HapHap22 November 2009 pukul 18.32

    the paragraph is very simple. the readers can't take information about that to much and i think the key words from the article like Mrs.Tika said is missing. so, check artigle and revition your paragraph.
    TQ

    BalasHapus
  6. riendaru23 November 2009 pukul 19.07

    I agree with Mrs. Kartika...
    Check it!...
    You have problem with the grammar...
    ( Like me... )

    Hihihi...

    BalasHapus

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