THE EFFECT OF TECHNOLOGICAL ADVANCEMENT CONTENT IN VIDEO GAMES ON CHILDERN PLAYER
By: SUMARLIN
NRP: 43 09 100 051
TPB CLASS: 16
The information society speaks about the the society that is well advanced in areas of technological advancement and equipped with knowledge that can be diffused to other societies. This knowledge relates to technology and communication on a global level. Many of us were born in societies which had started to embrace the burst of new technology. So we knew about the computer, the internet, chemical weapons and the list goes on. They were always updating of the new technology for their lives, for example is video games that update in everytimes. Some parents is agree if their children play it and other disagree. There era many opinion that be basic of their statement to agree or not, especially with the effect of it. Beside it can make the children happy and update of technology, it also has many negative effect for their habit.
Many of parents, thinks that they must to introduce their family with technology start from their children. Because they think more and more young their age, their absorb strength is more rapidly so they can catch the information more faster than the old man. Beside this their remind power is more strength. So it has solution to introduce technology with method that can make their children happy. And they choose video game as mediator, in order to their children not be left out of the advancement of technology and be entertainment for they. So they can study while enjoy playing.
But sometimes, they forget if beside it has positive effect its so has negative effect. The children was knew video games usually addicted to play it everytime in anywhere until they forget time to study, eat and rest. It can make they would be lazy person and not to care with around condition, its mean with slowly they was to cause to fall their children in the bad habit.
Now, we were know if some children like dispute with their friends. One of the caused is they like to imitate the action of player in video games especially in the violent content in video games. Many of they thinks that if they can to defeat their enemy with hardness they can be the hero likes in the video games that the winner is a hero. Moreover many of they be the opposer with their parents and family.
To sum up it we must carefully if we want to introduce something or the new technology with our family, friends and other people. Because its sure has positive and negative effect for us and for they, likes video games which make lazy and hardness children. So if we want to give something known for someone we must think its will well or not for they and us?!. Beside that we must to see their age, in order to they can catch the purpose of it, so they won’t make mistake with use it in the wrong time and wrong situation.
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the essay who write sumarlin is okay. but there is some word wrong type, like marlin type 'there era', may which right is 'there are'.
BalasHapusand usually in essay use V1( you use 'knew', you should use 'know')
thank's
Many of parents, thinks
BalasHapusThe children was knew video games usually addicted to play it everytime in anywhere until they forget time to study, eat and rest
we were know
its sure has positive and negative effect
[above sentences content several gramatical errors,]
Beside [or besised, pls check]
same with ziyan said that in first paragraph you must be use the V1 because the function is opening and tell about the fact.and i'm found the false words in first paragraph like "there era" (there are) and "knew" ( know).
BalasHapusmust be carefull in use the words
thanks for all, i will repair it...
BalasHapus